77th Challenge Result (Dinner with the folks)

February 17, 2010

Look at me, only two days late! Erm, yeah. Before we get to mich’s pick, let’s appreciate all of the entries.

Stephen Kellogg was both sinister:

The first course is served
The seventh party member
lies on the table

and romantic:

The first course is served
Wine, Chocolate and kisses
And then, off to bed

Alec was matrimonial:

The first course is served
Hard time and kitchen duty
’til death do us part…

Ben had a special Valentine’s Day meal:

“The first course is served!”
Thanks for cooking Sweetie. Wait –
are those McNuggets?

And now to mich:

Ah, cannibalism, romance, prison KP, McNuggets, family dinners ….

so much food for thought!

I enjoyed the narrative arcs of all the entries, but have to go with Joanna’s “Veiled insults with side of guilt”; now THAT’S a family dinner!

The first course is served
Veiled insults with side of guilt
Dinner with the folks

Thanks, mich! And yay, me! Our new first line is dinner with the folks. Put on your haiku shoes, and I’ll see you next week!

Yours,
Joanna

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6 Responses to “77th Challenge Result (Dinner with the folks)”

  1. Ben Says:

    Dinner with the folks
    or a sharp poke in the eye?
    Use my pointy stick.

  2. Ben Says:

    Dinner with the folks?
    Please, make a good impression.
    Put your pants back on.

  3. Stephen Says:

    Dinner with the folks
    Parsley, sage, rosemary, thyme
    Paul and Art say grace

  4. mattrix Says:

    Dinner with the folks,
    Awkward sex in their guest room,
    Gotta love first dates!


  5. So I guess this could go at least two ways…

    Dinner with the folks
    Wonderful time together
    Now asking her hand

    or

    Dinner with the folks
    Weirder than she said they are
    Having second thoughts

  6. Sam2U Says:

    Dinner with the folks.
    Although I know that I swerved,
    A squirrel was served.


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